Forever.....

(This is a little something I've been writing in my journal... It's turning in to a story but this is just the prologue!)

What would you do with forever? Would you spend it on revenge and destruction or with the your soulmate?

I'm alone, always have been and always will be. Created when time started turning and space began to grow. Searching, stalking,wondering what ever is.....


I'd always been different, an endless imagination, a little power of thinking. I played in my mind but endlessly searching in the universe. What I wanted was someone to be with me no matter what, who wouldn't betray me, some one who would never desert me through thick and thin,some one who couldn't care less if I were a vampire and a complete different species... I was Natures Child, the first being from before everything.....


(That's what I wrote... But how could I improve it?)

It's a very contemplative piece, it could really be quite a powerful concept with persistance. ;D
You may need the slightest bit of Editing, to iron out the rare errors in Grammar, but other then that, it's brilliant. ;D

I've done 4 chapters in my journal but I don't feel that is that good....